Caravan to Utah!

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43606/Caravan-to-Utah-Zion-National-Park-1
It’s a blog who travels to Utah writing her experience about her unforgettable travelling. Firstly, the blogger writes how to plan the trip and how excited! Then she writes about how enjoy in the trip. She uses many abbreviations as “LV” and Technical action as “=)”, and social remarks as “Woohoo!” in her writing. When she wants to emphasize something, she also writes with capital letter as “A Big puddle of VERY COLD water!” The writing style is informal. The relationship between poster and the commenter is friend. Using filthy language as “Very sucky. . . but it was worth it.” The poster would like to use symbol in this writing as “NO WAY!” Putting some interested picture to appeal the reader as “Please don’t feed the animals!!” It seems funny. The poster puts group picture at the end of the writing. It seems that he never forget this trip. It is a way to fascinate your reader. The commenters also use technical actions and social remarks. The poster starts to ask the question to the commenter.

Caravan to Utah!http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43606/Caravan-to-Utah-Zion-National-Park-1

He uses many abbreviations as “LV” and Technical action as “=)”, and social remarks as “Woohoo!” in his writing. When he wants to emphasize something, he also writes with capital letter as “A Big puddle of VERY COLD water!” The writing style is informal. The relationship between poster and the commenter is friend. Using filthy language as “Very sucky. . . but it was worth it.” The poster would like to use symbol in this writing as “NO WAY!” Putting some interested picture to appeal the reader as “Please don’t feed the animals!!” It seems funny.








The poster puts group picture at the end of the writing. It seems that he never forget this trip. It is a way to fascinate your reader. The commenters also use technical actions and social remarks.
http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43606/Caravan-to-Utah-Zion-National-Park-1

Our Zion Adventure Begins!

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43746/Our-Zion-Adventure-Begins-Zion-National-Park-4

Sincitytr turns to write her experience to Zion National Park. She gives a brief introduction about the environments and using social remark such as “Wooo hoooo!”Giving a clear title but her content let the readers disappoint. She lacks the content of the article and the reader can’t get the point what she wants to express. There are no commenters in this writing. Her writing doesn’t seem to be interesting and attracting to the audiences. I think she needs to express interesting opinions on interesting topics that can catch the attention of enough of the right people.

Off we go to Zion! Its Breast-takingly beautiful!

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43560/Off-we-go-to-Zion-its-Breast-takingly-beautiful-Zion-National-Park-1
This week RJ writes about travelling to Zion National Park. The writing style is informal. Making short sentence and construct the sentence with “. . . .” as “A little girl threw a snad ball at nancys butt…hahaah dunno why…there was a lot of people there so it was noisy plus all those kids…argh… “ According to this sentence, the poster uses social remarks as “hahaah” and abbreviations such as “dunno.” He uses simple sentence to finish his writing. He writes everything about in his mind without noticing grammar and the pattern of the sentence. He inserts some extra words and forgets to put symbol to express the meaning such as “430am… “in his essay such as “we looked at the clouds and shapes they took…stars..the moon…told stories…and discussed the secrets of the universe…the when the sky was totally covered with clouds around 430am…” I totally doubt that it is his draft because he neglects everything in his writing. The commenter is his friend. I found some of the interesting abbreviations in the commenter such as “grzechu.” I don’t know what is “ huwag kang mag-alala!.” RJ does grammar error in his comment. They don’t make content comment and clarification request to the blogger.

How Beautiful If Nothing More Than To Wait At Zion’s Door

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43672/How-Beautiful-If-Nothing-MoreThan-To-Wait-At-Zions-Door-Zion-National-Park-3
This time TRE 69 writes about his travel experience to Zion National Park. She uses few social remarks and technical actions. She posts long post which is more details than another blogger. Starting her writing with posting picture is more appeal to the reader to read it. Although her posting is so long but it doesn’t make me bored to read it. She has to use subheadings in her writing which will help the reader more interesting in her posting. Because some of the readers just scan the content. She has a useful topic, simple language with no useless jargon. It’s pity that they are no comments in her writing. She uses some of the phrases in her writing such as “wait for” “came up.”

Touchdown Zion!

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43616/TouchdownZion-Zion-National-Park-3
Biglush23 writes his experience to Zion National Park. He is the good one as I saw. Firstly, the author creates a good title and good content. And he uses social remarks and technical actions and he also puts Japanese words in his writing. And he puts pictures to lead the reader to know what will introduce to next. The commenter uses captial lettter to emphasize stuff as "FINALLY." He elaborates his trip particularly so the reader can observe that he is an attentive person. From his writing, the reader observe that some of the interesting and funny things happened in their trip. He comprehends that how to sepearate the paragraph and make the reader interesting.

Trav Buddy

This blog is designed for people who adore travelling. There are many categorizes at the top of the blog such as hotel reservation, flight and restaurants. If you want to go to travel the world, you can look for this blog to plan your schedule. The one I choose is the Zion National Park in the United States. There is a TB Gang, 8 members who is a professor and students travelling to Zion National park in their holiday. After visiting the destination, they have to share their experience at Trav Buddy. It is as an online teaching. If you are enjoy travelling, you join this blog to create your own blog. It is interesting.