Touchdown Zion!

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43616/TouchdownZion-Zion-National-Park-3
Biglush23 writes his experience to Zion National Park. He is the good one as I saw. Firstly, the author creates a good title and good content. And he uses social remarks and technical actions and he also puts Japanese words in his writing. And he puts pictures to lead the reader to know what will introduce to next. The commenter uses captial lettter to emphasize stuff as "FINALLY." He elaborates his trip particularly so the reader can observe that he is an attentive person. From his writing, the reader observe that some of the interesting and funny things happened in their trip. He comprehends that how to sepearate the paragraph and make the reader interesting.