2008年11月9日 星期日

Off we go to Zion! Its Breast-takingly beautiful!

http://www.travbuddy.com/travel-blogs/43560/Off-we-go-to-Zion-its-Breast-takingly-beautiful-Zion-National-Park-1
This week RJ writes about travelling to Zion National Park. The writing style is informal. Making short sentence and construct the sentence with “. . . .” as “A little girl threw a snad ball at nancys butt…hahaah dunno why…there was a lot of people there so it was noisy plus all those kids…argh… “ According to this sentence, the poster uses social remarks as “hahaah” and abbreviations such as “dunno.” He uses simple sentence to finish his writing. He writes everything about in his mind without noticing grammar and the pattern of the sentence. He inserts some extra words and forgets to put symbol to express the meaning such as “430am… “in his essay such as “we looked at the clouds and shapes they took…stars..the moon…told stories…and discussed the secrets of the universe…the when the sky was totally covered with clouds around 430am…” I totally doubt that it is his draft because he neglects everything in his writing. The commenter is his friend. I found some of the interesting abbreviations in the commenter such as “grzechu.” I don’t know what is “ huwag kang mag-alala!.” RJ does grammar error in his comment. They don’t make content comment and clarification request to the blogger.

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