Here is Taiwan
When I hear that she possesses this stuff, I attempt to ask her how to buy a land, decorate her shop and how many days does she play SL in a week? She wastes a lot of time to decorate his shop and manage her business. Many couples go to her hostel in order to make sex. If she is serious to operate her business, her income enhances rapidly according to her word. She informed me that there is free site in Geneva because I told her that we want to build our university too and university need full land to build it. If we want to establish it, she will introduce some friends to me and help me to do it. There is "Bahamut" 巴哈姆特 in Taiwan. If you are a fan of "Bahamut", you can go to play it and earn money.There are 7ELEVEN and old movie theater and the most interesting thing is "土地公廟" .
According to her word, there are hardly no people to visit Taiwan. If you want to know how Taiwan is in SL, go to visit.
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When I first read your news, I got little surprised at "Taiwan." So proud that we can find Taiwan in SL. Then, I think that French must fall in love with TW. In comparison to other continent, TW is just a tiny Islan that many people even don't hear of it. The French not only stay in TW but also take account for his own enterprises. You mention that the hotel he owns is the place for couples. This is so interesting that this behavior happens in reality commonly. Maybe someday I'll turn to a boss possessing many enterprises and earn numbers of fortunes!
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after i read your news i find out there are two sentences which are not so clear.
1.She wastes a lot of time to decorate his shop and manage her business.
Do you want to say that she "spend" a lot of time on her building plan?
2.According to her word, there are hardly no people to visit Taiwan.
If you want to tell us that few people will visit taiwan in sl, i think you don't have to write "no people" because "hardly" already means that.
[2009/04/16 8:36] Una Rewell: maybe we have to see iris's story
[2009/04/16 8:36] Sharon Byron: maybe we can be faster
[2009/04/16 8:38] Una Rewell: oh
[2009/04/16 8:38] Una Rewell: taiwan?
[2009/04/16 8:39] Una Rewell: in sl?
[2009/04/16 8:39] yang75 Anton: and she own two shps and a hostle so i ask her how to establish a shop and hot to manage
[2009/04/16 8:39] yang75 Anton: how
[2009/04/16 8:39] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:39] yang75 Anton: taiwan in SL
[2009/04/16 8:39] yang75 Anton: but it is small
[2009/04/16 8:39] Una Rewell: a shop
[2009/04/16 8:39] Sharon Byron: it's an interesting topic and ur interview too
[2009/04/16 8:39] Una Rewell: it's cool
[2009/04/16 8:39] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:39] Una Rewell: ya
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: she also have a hostle
[2009/04/16 8:40] Sharon Byron: but I think u have a sudden conclusion
[2009/04/16 8:40] Una Rewell: hospital?
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: she told me that many couples go to make love
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: haha
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: hotel
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:40] Una Rewell: or hotel?
[2009/04/16 8:40] Sharon Byron: haha I notice that
[2009/04/16 8:40] Una Rewell: make love>
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: so i think i need to change my last paragraph
[2009/04/16 8:40] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:40] Una Rewell: i can check it later
[2009/04/16 8:41] Sharon Byron: cus u went into a sudden end
[2009/04/16 8:41] Sharon Byron: so I get confused at the end
[2009/04/16 8:41] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:41] Una Rewell: ya
[2009/04/16 8:41] yang75 Anton: so i will change it
[2009/04/16 8:41] Sharon Byron: u just mention Rafe Silvercloud for few lines
[2009/04/16 8:41] Amberlin Zuta: I think maybe u have to work a little bit about ur title
[2009/04/16 8:41] Sharon Byron: it's better to talk more about her/him or delete it
[2009/04/16 8:41] Sharon Byron: I think
[2009/04/16 8:42] yang75 Anton: because i don't no how 2 continue this story, i only checked with her for a while
[2009/04/16 8:42] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:42] yang75 Anton: any opinion?
[2009/04/16 8:43] yang75 Anton: any opinion?
[2009/04/16 8:43] Una Rewell: no
[2009/04/16 8:43] yang75 Anton: wht abt amber
[2009/04/16 8:43] Sharon Byron: only last paragraph
[2009/04/16 8:43] yang75 Anton: ya
[2009/04/16 8:43] Sharon Byron: then all ok
[2009/04/16 8:43] Una Rewell: ha
[2009/04/16 8:43] Una Rewell: amber?
[2009/04/16 8:43] yang75 Anton: thanks 4 ur suggestion
[2009/04/16 8:43] Amberlin Zuta: ur title
[2009/04/16 8:44] yang75 Anton: i still cosider the title's name
[2009/04/16 8:44] yang75 Anton: haha
[2009/04/16 8:44] yang75 Anton: consider
[2009/04/16 8:44] Una Rewell: i think i have to see your story later
[2009/04/16 8:44] yang75 Anton: ok
[2009/04/16 8:44] Una Rewell: ok
[2009/04/16 8:44] Amberlin Zuta: u can focus on a specific point of view
[2009/04/16 8:45] yang75 Anton: u can't open it?
[2009/04/16 8:45] Amberlin Zuta: and make it ur title
[2009/04/16 8:45] yang75 Anton: ya
In Iris' SL news, she interviewed with one person who has run her own business at the place called "Taiwan" in SL, and also Iris mentions some very interesting spots in "Taiwan" like 土地公廟 or 7-11. We all think that her news about "Taiwan" in SL is quite fascinating. But there are some problems of English usage in her writing that make the content a little bit confusing. Also the end of the news is too sudden that we think perhaps she has to revise this paragraph. The last point is my personal opinion: I think the title is too plain for this interesting interview, so maybe Iris can come up with a more attractive title.
Intersting! Can you provide a link to Taiwan?
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